It was a
cold, somber spring morning and I firmly grabbed the pole as the bus pulled
out, trying to retain balance in my high heels while my iPod was playing
Starlight by Muse.
I noticed
them right away; she was seductively leaning against the pole and he was
watching her with lust and sparkles mixed in his eyes. He grabbed her waist,
pulled her towards him and kissed her passionately. They made me feel quite
uncomfortable and I turned my head away, desperately trying not to watch them
but they were standing right in front of me and I could still see them. They
didn’t mind people watching them though. They only had eyes for each other as if
they were alone on the bus, smiling, whispering into each others ears and
kissing.
I bet their
morning wasn’t somber and I’m sure they didn’t notice the ominous dark clouds gathering
above the city.
That closing line was fantastic, and somewhat foreboding.
ReplyDeleteThanks Robbie, that means a lot to me.
DeleteYes, the clouds! Is something bad going to happen? Nice visuals of your journey in this post.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dicky, glad you liked it.
DeleteI loved the ending to this. Very sombre. All light, happy and open, and then suddenly you panned out of their world. Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteThank you. *blush*
Delete1. That song is going to be stuck in my head all day now.
ReplyDelete2. I sometimes love/hate being privy to moments like those.
3. Beautifully written, sweets.
It's a great song, isn't it? It's one of my all-times favourite and that's where my nickname originates from ;) Thanks for your compliments sweetie :*
Deletenicely written...and provacative:)
ReplyDeleteI'm rude. I would have stared, caught her eye and given her a grin and a thumbs up...(but I'm weird like that.)
ReplyDeleteThat's not weird at all, sometimes is hard not to watch. ;)
DeleteLove the post and that song.... :) I don't know what I would have done, probably same as Nessa :)
ReplyDeleteThanks sweetie :)
DeleteI kinda chuckled while I read the closing line. Maybe it's just me being weird and all. :) Nice post! Been away for a while and this is my first read. Thanks. :)
ReplyDeleteGlad to see you back, I thought you gave up on blogging. And thanks for commenting :)
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